Here we are at #dversepoetspub punching our way to #quadrille160. Thank you, De, for the prompt.
Punch drunk #quadrille.
Punch drunk workers lacking life’s respect,
Punch drunk workers lacking life’s love,
Punch drunk workers lacking life’s quality,
Punch drunk workers lacking life’s satisfaction.
Working poet showing grafters respect,
Working poet showing grafters love,
Poetry showing grafters quality of life
This poet gains satisfaction.
#Quadrille, #dverse.
©19/09/2022 rog leach
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I like the repetition here, it works well for you. Feels like work often does, nose to the grindstone, round and round and round…
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at least some of us have a release. mine is poetry. thank you
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Like a chain gang song….
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I agree with De, the repetition allows us to feel that lack, and then the duality with the gifted poet!
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Thank you
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Welcome! ♥️🌹♥️
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i love the word play here!
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I agree about the repetition, Rog. So glad I’m a poet and not a punchdrunk worker.
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I am both
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The repitition bring home tge message. Happy to have poetry in my life. Retired and drinking beer on hot days😁
Much💛love
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Enjoy your retirement.♥️
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The reason to never hire a boxer?
Nice poem, Rob. I don’t know anyone who is punch drunk.
Drinking too much, yes, but not from head blows.
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I think it’s about making the unseen and unheard seen and heard.
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Thank you
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The fruitless wash-rinse-repeat of it all is well-heard by the repetition in the punch half as does the poet giving voice to seemingly unheard tiredness.
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Thank you
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