
Helter Skelter.
I live the helter skelter life,
Round and round and round,
Sliding away from where I was.
But where I was, was not right,
Round and round and round,
Sliding towards where I will be.
Back up the stairs through the darkness,
Will I make the top,
Again and again and again.
Just walk away, away, away
From the bollocks of the
Helter skelter life style of
Climbing life’s greasy pole
Only to be knocked back down.
© 13/09/2022 Rog Leach
here tonight at the #dverse pub we invited to look at the houses painted by Lee Madgwick and create an ekphrastic poem. thank you Sarah for the prompt.
I love your use of repetition here – works with the helter skelter theme, and you really capture a state of mind with it.
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thank you
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Whenever you climb, you are on your way down.
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Round and round your words went to capture the helter skelter of life so well.
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Thank you
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Suitably hard hitting….enjoyed this.
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This poem exuded so much energy! I could feel the movement. Well done.
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Thank you
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A helter skelter life it is.
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even the little red caboose couldn’t tackle this one!
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Tried commenting before – not sure it made it. Certainly sums up spinning out of control!
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Luv the way repetition and a sense of aimlessness too resonated in your poem
Much💛love
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♥️
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To get to the top to get pushed down, like Sisyphus.
~Dora
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Sisyphus i just to look up. Thanks i know how he feels.
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Life can certainly present itself that way Rog, like a thanklessly repetitions grind. But as the grind winds down towards the end, we find we’d might like to go round round and round — just once more my friend.
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Excellent Rog! Very apt for this helter skelter thing we call life! 👌👍👏
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Thank you
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Good writing to that image, Rog.
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p.s. I could not find a way to comment on your OLN spider poem on the page, so I’ll put it here. One thing spiders are really good at is being patient. Sooner or later something wanders in…
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♥️👍
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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