
Tonight at #dversepoetspub Merrill D Smith we have been prompted to write a 144 word prosery based on a given line from a poem. tonight’s line is from James Masao Mitsui’s poem “spring poem for the sake of breathing. written after a walk to Foste Island.” the line being “an early moon is just a piece of change in the softening sky!”
My dandelion life.
(a flash fiction)
The yellow field of dandelions waved in unison with her first orgasm. After having left her fathers corrupt church of evangelists. A christen cult stealing from the naive. Her old life having stagnated under his schoolings.
Her father the local cult leader started every sermon with โAn early moon is just a piece of change, in the softening sky of gods heaven!โ. Died at the hands of his last loverโs husband.
Under the strawberry moon of the first spring since her release from tyranny. Love finally found her in both physical and emotional forms. Dandelions will forever stand for this the morning of the rest of her life. Aged forty-five she said goodbye to her fatherโs manipulation and hello to the pleasure of living in a free and easy hippy commune. Love for herself and mother earth now all she felt. No more control?
ยฉ 05/06/2023 rog leach



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