
Moonlit Hum #quadrille.
The hum of salt water
Rushing the beach,
Moonshine not only,
By the glass.
The hum of salt water,
Wash down my cheeks,
Moonlit waves,
Rushing the beach.
Moonshine not only,
Reflected in my eyes,
Relief beyond survival,
Better than wine,
By the glass.
© rog leach 21/09/2026
Better than wine, indeed! I want ALL these hums!
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I’ll definitely take a glass of that, please!
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Cheers
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Rog, I love the vibe and imagery of this one! Ya definitely captured a good feel! 🩵
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Thanjs
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yum
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I like the use of moonlight. Good poem!
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“The hum of saltwater” was surprising. I like it, and the repetition.
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Thanks
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Good words Rog 👏 I think it could be tightened up with less commas and lower case line starts where appropriate, but that’s just me. 👍
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Nice thought thanks
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Moon lit water… cannot be better.
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Thankd
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Love the hum, Rog.
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Tuanks
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