here we are again on quadrille monday at dverse poet pub. with the word stand. This piece is inspired by a young child I spotted on my cycle ride home from work this evening. With his face covered in blackberry juice from a hedgerow his father was picking from. remembering being both father and child in that situation got me thinking what if I was not privaliged enough to have such privalage.
https://dversepoets.com/2021/08/09/dverse-monday-quadrille-stand/

Blackberry Temptation!
They stand tears in eyes!
Blackberries out of reach,
Barbed wire fence, gun tower,
Between them.
Nature’s harvest torments
mocking empty bellies,
Of starving prisoners,
Guard’s faces
smeared and taunting.
Child and father remembering
Taste of blackberries before war,
Death summons on barbed wire.
© rog leach 09/08/2021
i am taking this poem to an open mic night on sunday 29th august 2021.

Such incredible and stunning imagery throughout your words!
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Rog you set a vivid scene with your words and such aching sorrow. I’m glad the people you saw on your bike ride were blessed enough not to have to risk death to enjoy the simple pleasure of hand picking blackberries.
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It is a simple pleasure but also a privilege
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Oh my, Rog! This is stunning and painful to imagine. You took me right there, and it is heartbreaking to think of.
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You’re welcome.
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If Ingrid’s poem made me think of WW1, you made me think of the second and send chills down my spine. A beautifully written Quadrille about nearly unimaginable pain.
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You went really dark with this Rog! A great work of imagination.
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Thank you. I did take I snippet of inspiration from your poem this evening.
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I’m honoured!
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Incredibly heartbreaking, so descriptive.
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Goodness this is a harrowing harvest – the out of reach part speaks volumes
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The torture of it all is palpable in this poem. We can easily take so much for granted….blackberries, freedom and life!
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The torture of it all is palpable. We can easily take so much for granted….blackberries, freedom and life!
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Vivid imagery and powerful words. Well done.
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A reminder that we all must take a stand for peace in our world, and against the atrocities of war that are chillingly recounted. Well done!
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Sad, remembering Rog. Luv where the prompt took you.
Much❤love
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it started with a smile and the smile disappears as the turns unravel. wow. wow!!! so powerful in 44 words.
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Wow, Roger, you really made me believe that you had had the experience of being a prisoner – this was so real.
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David
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Heartbreaking but beautiful. A reminder to not take simple pleasures for granted.
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Such a vivid scene in your quadrille – it is easy to forget how privileged many of us are.
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Loved this. The preamble took me back in my own memories and then the poem woke me up.
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You’re welcome.
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