Skedaddle! (original) (This was written after my first visit to a greyhound race meeting. Some of the words used are Loosely based on the names of the dogs’ names.)
thanks to Merrill @#dversepoetspub we are writing cascade poems this evening. As you can see i have transformed an old poem into this form. i thought it would suit this poem.
Skedaddle! (In Cascade form)
Vacant tote skedaddles away with loot, Westfield Eleanor going like a bullet, Wreck it Rolo ruins his run, Splaattt.
Winners for your two slippery rascals, A golden wind blowing for totes. Vacant tote skedaddles away with loot.
Race course sponsors still believe, Fabulous glamour still lives on with, Westfield Eleanor going like a bullet.
Bombay puzzle tree felled, By waste of space on race card 115, Whoosh, Wreck it Rolo ruins his run.
Back in AUGUST of 2024 at a meeting of one of the poetry groups I attend on a regular basis. Almost everybody who shared a poem or three got tongue tied and tripped over their tongue. I wrote this to share at the next meeting, not quit a quadrille.
Tongue tied.
Brain faster than tongue, Twisted words, twisted thoughts, Tongues tripping on words, Mind tripping on acid.
Tongues falling over lost words, Wishes wanting, wanting to be given, Gibberish kicking in, Throwing ability, spoken word ability.
Brain awkwardly fidgets, Against tongue tied gibberish, Tongue twisted into tied knots, Absurd caterwauling’s getting weaker.
Numb mind grasps control back, Twisted and tied tongue permanent? Not on my watch, not on my watch, Words full of life, just fighting to get born!
welcome back #Dversepoetrypub. trying to smile through a scrambled head after returning to work after to long a break. where i sat not doing much for longer than I normally do.
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