good evening world. Tonight Punam has asked us @#dversepoetspub to pick an opening line from a list of poems to use as a closing line.
A.A. Awesome arsonists. #dversepoetspub
Outrageously Depraved individuals, Only beyond this point, Burn baby, burn, Barbeque politicians’ assets.
Why? politicians are Wicked, Wicked fire starters, Burning the poor to feed, their own egotistical needs.
A.A. Awesome arsonists awake, Come fry its Friday, Do you have a light boy, Goodbye dear friends, It was a pleasure to burn.
Last line was the opening line to Ray Bradbury Fahrenheit 451. A book which is still on, my to read list. Two songs also came to mind while writing this. The crazy world of Arthur brown’s Fire. Firestarter by the Prodigy. The book Firestarter by Stephen King is well worth a read.
Skedaddle! (original) (This was written after my first visit to a greyhound race meeting. Some of the words used are Loosely based on the names of the dogs’ names.)
thanks to Merrill @#dversepoetspub we are writing cascade poems this evening. As you can see i have transformed an old poem into this form. i thought it would suit this poem.
Skedaddle! (In Cascade form)
Vacant tote skedaddles away with loot, Westfield Eleanor going like a bullet, Wreck it Rolo ruins his run, Splaattt.
Winners for your two slippery rascals, A golden wind blowing for totes. Vacant tote skedaddles away with loot.
Race course sponsors still believe, Fabulous glamour still lives on with, Westfield Eleanor going like a bullet.
Bombay puzzle tree felled, By waste of space on race card 115, Whoosh, Wreck it Rolo ruins his run.
perspective poetry 
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