Strange smiles
Strangers are wicked people
Smiles ugly out in the rain
Strangers faces unwanted
Smiling strangers non faces
Strange when you’re a stranger
Smiling faces unwanted
Strange people are ugly wicked
26/11/2020
A Pleiades poem Written under the influence of The Doors.
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Yep, could definitely see the influence of The Doors. 😀 A very mesmerizing poem and one that I find evocative. Brilliant comparisons throughout your beautiful writing. It’s amazing.
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Doors, yes, and I can hear dark music behind it.
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When you’re strange / faces come out of the rain
Yesss… Brings ne back, alright. Thanks.
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A whole lot of strangeness going on here!
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Doors, yes, my goodness this is a powerful write!
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I thought it sounded familiar! I saw you for a minute there at the live read a few times and then you were gone. Maybe you’ll have better luck next time.
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Hopefully i will get a better connection next time. Do not know why he connection was btoken though
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My data speed only allows me to be there with sound. I can see everyone and hear them, but I can only join by voice. Very frustrating!
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Jim would be pleased!
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I got The Doors straight away when I started reading this! A great poem and a hard form to write.
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very clever!
-David
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Well done.
Anna :o]
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You “rocked” this Pleiades form …. Bravo.
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The Doors! Very strange. 😀 And nicely done.
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