WHISPERED

Look into my eyes you whispered,

Here I sit my programming failing

Society Automaton not I.

Your oil-slick eyes showing nought.

Programmed to fail at their thinking

Your eyes raven blackness doing the programming

Programmed not to watch, listen and learn

Hypnotised by your gold rimmed pupils,

Programmed to think the same. small

As everyone else

Programmed to think romance is good

Your eyes lack of inner beaty

Program us to believe god knows best

 A wink and I am

Programmed not to question

Your eyes close believing me,

 Programmed to follower their power

Follow your programming not I.

Automaton no longer

Starting to see their thinking

Seeing, hearing and thinking for myself

The small not viable anymore

Romance a fake to hide their control of you

The universe too small for deities

Question it all

 Start by toppling their totem of mythical power

Their program iced up and useless

No longer required by me

Started 16/11/2020 rogleach

Finished 17/11/2020 rogleach

This peice was started after a discussion with my day job colleages. This evenings prompt helped me add the finshing touhes thank you Mish.

“look into my eyes, if you dare”

7 thoughts on “WHISPERED

  1. This is certainly a sci-fi poem and it was a treat, start to finish, to read it all and let the words be absorbed. Wow. The AI becoming aware, sentient, human–it is one of my favorite themes in science fiction. You communicate the repetition that is manifested in people very well too. When do WE become aware? What do we actually believe? Are these thoughts truly our own or are we thinking from a different source (ex: as a result of upbringing)? Such an eloquent poem here, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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  2. Your doubts make me think of Pierre-Simon Laplace’s comment to Napoléon when he asked why he made no mention of God in his theory of cosmology. “Sire, je n’ai pas eu besoin de cette hypothèse.” (Sire, I didn’t need that particular hypothesis.)

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