written for tonights prompt at dverse pots pub. the prompt from Merril was to write a piece of prosery no longer than 144 words tat had to include a line from a chosen poem. the poem she chose was Planertium by Adrianne Rich and the line “i am bombarded yet i still stand”. she chose this because of the last year or so we have all just witnessed.
Pretentious.
Here I sit glass bottle in a paper bag. A park bench for tonight’s bed.
It was not always this way for me. I was once a pretentious poet putting down others. Cursed with the arrogance of a privileged childhood. I was a proper spoilt brat looking down on those I despised, those without a university education.
I would bombard those of lesser social standing than me with abuse and ignorance. One day I over stepped the mark with a street poet calling herself Planetarium stood on a soap box on a street corner. “I am bombarded, yet I stand” was her response.
This shook me to the core of what I believed. I got home seeing my pretentious father through new eyes. That was thirty years ago. I gave up all when I plunged a knife into his heart and walked away.

© 08/11/2021 rog leach
Yikes! This guy has some issues to deal with–but I guess he’s no longer pretentious! 😀
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Poets must use their powers for good. There’s a lot of story behind this story, perhaps the father got poetic justice?
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I think this character needs Jesus now! 😃
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Oh, ouch — dark rog, but I sense a release, an escape.
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Way to shatter those pretensions! Sounds like a true artist to me…
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Wow. that was an unexpected ending, to say the least, Roger!
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David
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Thanks David
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the insertion of the line is so genious
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Thank you
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Fascinating how a few words can change the course of a life. I enjoyed your prose.
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Wow. That is powerful. Poets? Pretentious? How “Bukowski” of you. Well done.
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Of course.
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Thinking you are above others because of wealth or education is a great sin… but so is murder.
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They are on the same level one kills the body the other the mind. Thanks bjorn
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