https://dversepoets.com/2021/03/23/poetics-the-poet-as-painter/
WRITTEN FOR DVERSE
Thank you Laura for a challenging prompt tonight at poetics on tuesday.
the poet as a painter indeed

Part 1
An empty canvas on easel
in front of frustrated artist.
A dark sunrise in lens’s sight
Irritates photographer.
An empty ink well
Sits upon a perturbed poet’s desk.
The artists finds their Lost brush
And paints the stars and beyond.
Photographer removes lens cap
Captures sunrise over last nights bed.
Poet picks up ball point pen
Putting the sun to bed as the stars rise.
Part 2
Graze of green and black
Tree tops I see above jungle paradise.
Yellow scuffed over blue
Sunshine reflected from calm sea delight.
Yellow cohorts with red over white
Catches my eye like a firecracker over my highlighted head.
Finally finished with yellow speckled black
Of the stars sparkling my pleasure.
I love the progression of your poem …. the movement captivates … well done.
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thank you
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Very nicely done on both poems. Nature is always the muse that never fails us!
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I enjoyed the pondering in Part 1, Rog, the comparison of artist, photographer and poet, and the way they approach heaven and its sun and star rises, with the poet ‘putting the sun to bed as the stars rise’. I love how part 2 explodes with colour and ‘Catches my eye like a firecracker’!
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I like how you pose problems for all the artists and then solve them!
In part 2, the
“Graze of green and black” is a most memorable line.
p.s. thank you for joining in – the title should really be referenced as Richter – except I made an error there (oops) and it is really ‘abstract iii’ of his I featured- he is of course the painter without a brush.
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You really used all the colors on your easel
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